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Re: hey
Hello! As you know, I am Winter. So you like historical fiction? That's my favorite genre! My favorite eras are the Georgian, Victorian, and Tudor eras. I'm guessing you like ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Hey=]
Hello! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or more commonly just Winter). I see you've already had quite a warm welcome! My favourite book usually is the last book I’ve read ...
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Re: Hey, I'm Samantha
Hello Vamp Dollie! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (preferably just Winter). Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! Hmmmmm... Rosey did an excellent job of explaining the site. What else ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: NEW!
Hello Huff Puff! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter). Welcome to YWS! If you are looking for writing tips, you can ask any of the instructors (the people ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: The only part worth telling (revised)
Hello daydreamer! Well, this was truly outstanding. It had a wonderful flow and I noticed very few grammar mistakes. I guess you could say that grammar is my "specialty" when ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Ballerina *edited* 2/4/09
Alright, on with the review! Excitement filled the air as us Picard women put on petticoats and refreshed our curtsies. I think you should say "we Picard women" instead of ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Ballerina *edited* 2/4/09
Hello! Once again, I like the way this story is going. The plot is interesting. Here are my critiques: “HOW goes it, Marie!” The exclamation point should be a question ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Hi, I'm new
Hello Brittany! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! So, you like writing poetry? I don't know if you know this, but here on YWS we have many different usergroups that ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: ahh
Hello Greenmeans-go! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! La Reina covered the major rules, so I will explain the usergroups. Here on YWS we have lots of different groups that ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: hey i'm new!
Thanks! I can't wait to read it! -Winter
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: hey i'm new!
That sounds like a really interesting story! PM me when you post it because I would love to read it. What's it called? Or does it not have a title ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Second life
Hello Jok101! I am Winter and I shall review your script. Well... There's really nothing for me to review. Not because it's perfect, because it's so short. The only dialogue ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: hey i'm new!
Hello Ella! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter). Welcome to YWS! I don't know if I should leave this up to a greeter, but we have two main ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Oi to the... forum. =O
Hello! I'm Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter). You've a book published? I'm jealous! What else are you writing/have you written? If you have any questions, please feel free to ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Hey, I'm a newbie! Will you be my friend?I'm really nice:D
Hello Lindsay! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (preferably just Winter). I don't think anyone has explained the usergroups yet. Well here on YWS we have lots of different groups that ...
Jan 28, 2009
